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Looking For Advice On Writing Craftworlds

Discussion in 'Eldar' started by KillboFraggins, Feb 17, 2015.

  1. Hey, i'm always open to negative criticism so long as it's constructive. Honestly, I have to sift through so many death threats, insults against my bloodline, supposed race, sexuality and intelligence that I just shrug my shoulders at most things these days. At worst, you'd help me point out a few failings which need to be improved upon. Though, heh, if it's about the bad editing I already know about that one.

    Anyway, certainly am glad to know you thought it was worthwhile as a flaw. A few of the others have been more extreme than this in the past, but few others seemed to so naturally fit their objectives and ideology. Plus, there's the added bonus of it causing as many problems as it solves as they try to expand their influence across the Segmentum, which could lead to a few interesting situations. Have been mulling over adding a short story to help better emphasise the scale of their ambitions, but it's one which would need to be handled carefully so not to avoid reading Ward territory.

    Thanks again for the compliments and, if you ever do opt to do this for your own force, i'd be more than happy to offer any feedback or commentary you might want.
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