Not sure on the Bright Lance Emitters, sounds a bit.... hardcore? Also the Long-Rifle I assume is in the same fashion as Rangers/Pathfinders? I like the eagle. Could be a mechanical version of a 'Ventus' (plural = Venti), they are Eagle-like birds but in dark black-blue, @WanderingJester his char, Shin Zhu has one called 'Kaze', I insinuated they are Eldar-friendly animals similar of how Gyrinxes are their special cat-breed pets. I like the general name and look - if you need help with history, Jori and I are here!
@Uriel1339 Do you have a better idea for the Javelins? I am open to suggestions. Yeah, I thought I would draw back the string, and then the barrel would fire... whatever. But yes, works like a Ranger's weapon. Also, thanks. Only thing I know so far is he did found a shrine, but it was completely destroyed with all members but him, and so he wears all the member's spirit stones on his armor. Any suggestions for more? Anyone, players included? Thanks for inviting me and helping me
Actually if it is an ACTUAL Javeline. Then it's cool, but not as Bright Lance. I would make it like the Shining Spears weapon, but that you throw it instead and it explodes on contact. You could have like up to 3 per deployment or so. And if you really wanted to, you could make your origin homeworld a fallen craftworld: http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Craftworld Since the Fall some Craftworlds have been destroyed: Anaen Bel-Shammon Idharae (destroyed in all-out siege by Invaders chapter of the Adeptus Astartes) Kher-Ys Kolth'se [7] (Velderon comments that the actions of the Seers saved the spirit stones of this Craftworld that powered Wraithlords which stopped the Necron advance on Jukiinas) Malan'tai (812.M41 by the Doom of Malan'tai)[6] Mor-rioh'i (destroyed by the Imperium in the Great Crusade) Muirgaythh[12] Destroyed by the forces of Slaanesh She'enshar Thuyelsa Destroyed by the Tenth Company of Space Wolves during the Great Crusade [10] Zu'lasa [9] Personal favorite would be Idharae since they had been recently destroyed and you can make epic tales up of how your guy joined the final stance and perhaps doesn't even remember how his armor survived. (Because Cegorach sent a bunch of harlequins to recover it before forever lost, lolz!)
Shining Spear Phoenix Lord is known - so negative. Rule #1 (literally): Rules: - EVERY player is a UNIQUE Pheonix Lord (no known ones are playable such as Fuegan, Iryllith, etc.)
Name: Zilyana The blind Age: 4000ish Founded Shrine: Shrieking Bats Current Number of Shrines: 5 Homeworld / Craftworld of Origin: Arach-Qin Gear: - Armor: Agile like armor with Anti-Grav boosters in the Feet and magnetic gloves and boots to help when scaling metal objects --- Body Light armor Resistant against Regular melee weapons or lighter arms --- Helmet Bat like helmet with a In built Ultra sound device that Sends out a low Frequency to give the wearer a Feel for the surroundings can be used to detected hidden enemies or things like mine. Mimic splicer Used in the helmets of this Shrine are the mimic splicers rare technology That is used to record and imitate the sounds of other voices of other races or animals. Various functions in this helmet the ability to scramble or cut and put together sounds --- Other A holo field like Cloak that goes around the armor of the wearers distorting there image. - Weapons: --- Primary Weapon Phoenix Screaming bat mask The Mimic Technology Within this helmet allow Zilyana To amplify and boost the Frequency of recorded sounds to become Deadly to many races. During a battle against the tyranids the screaming bat used this to there advantage and found a frequency that effected tyranids to the highest degree causing there heads to explode and have proven very useful when evading space wolves with there sensitive hearing. --- Secondary Weapon Light Focusing Carbine - (Laser carbine) --- Grenades / Consumables ( Sound Emitters Emitters that are linked to the phoenix's helmet that can use recorded sounds from her linked helmet and send out those sounds from there end) - Special: --- Sound inhibiting Field generator that contain all sound within a Radius or scrambles them Can be used when taking out High Value targets To contain any noise History- The Founding of the Shrieking Bat Shrine Revolves around the legend Of Gildaren IV A ancient world that Belong to the Eldar until the night lords arrived A company worth of Night lords Bombarded the planet from orbit Causing massive devastation over the planet and Releasing a chemical into the atmosphere that blotted out the sun with black clouds turning it into a endless night. When the Arach-Qin learned of this desecration. They were Angered by such desecration of one of maiden worlds. The Autarch of the Craftworld was ready to send a larger force of Eldar Until Zilyana approached him. Zilyana Came to the Autarch with the possibility of Deploying her forces ahead of the main force to Take them out. She said to the Autarch she would take 9 of her Disciples and herself to Cleanse the world of the night lord Company and would do this all within a several months. The Autarch decided to hear the Phoenix lord out and allow her to do this But Would come when her time was up with the rest of the forces if she could not Complete this. She and her disciples left for the planet through the web way. when reaching the planet She and her Disciples began there Campaign Against the night lords. Zilyana had herself and her Disciples began First taking out night lords that were alone away from there groups and caused them to disappear. After Several Disappearances the night lords Realized that they were being hunted. The night lords began there own hunt looking for the eldar. Now only Going in squads to hunt the Eldar. Zilyana began having her Disciples use there mimic Devices to begin tricking the night lords into ambushes spots were they would take out there squads with Precision fire from there Carbines and Zilyana's own Sound inhibiting field Generator to make sure they go out silently and there own yells would not be heard. The Campaign wen't on for weeks Night lords watching there own back while Eldar Attempted to avoid Night lord By the end of all this 90 Dead night lords lay on the planet and 4 dead eldar among the Disciples. The Phoenix lord managing to Sneak aboard the night lords vessel began a battle against there Captain and the remains of there crew. The battle wen't on for a day before the Phoenix captain stood Against the Captain in a duel the captain had already set up a ambush with two of his brothers During the battle against the The Phoenix lord The Night lord Captain used his own surprise attack Several blinding grenades were deployed Blinding the Phoenix lord temporary as the night lords wen't in for the final strike. Zilyana then Activated her own Mask using the Bats shriek she Aimed her head towards the Three Night lords And stunned them with a Shriek that damaged there hearing and sen't them back from her. She them used the time as they got up To kill The Captain then send out another Shriek Shriek sending the two night lords back. Now signaling in for the surviving disciples to strike two shots rang out silencing the rest of the night remaining two night lords. When the Autarch and The phoenix lord returned through the web way to the craft world she returned with only 4 of her Disciples. Loosing half of there own to the Night lords But the Strike itself was successful. That day she Founded the Shrine of the Shrieking Bat and the tale of Zilyana the blind was told to others of the craft world from her Disciples as she began Receiving warriors for training down this aspect path. She had 4 other Shrines besides the one on Arch-Qin Made to honor her 5 fallen Disciples and have the teaching spread.
