OOC: By the way OOC means Out of Character. All you really need to do is edit out the Librarian stuff with the Black Templars and your post is fine.
Name: Brylidassian-Translates as Opener of the Gates of Doom (if i recall correctly) Gender: XY Aspect Pathfinder Craftworld: Alaitoc Equipment: Melta Bombs, Fusion Grenades, Haywire Grenades, Hallucinogen Grenades, Splinter Pistol, Shuriken Pistol, Fusion Pistol, Needle Pistol, Long Rifle, Needle Pistol, Face-Mask with built in vox system and air filtration, cloak hood and cape with cloaking system, mesh armor. Traits: One shot, one kill: Since becoming a Pathfinder, Brylidassian has never missed a shot. Ever. And it is rare that said shot does not kill. He is accurate even for a Pathfinder, approaching the skill of the infamous Vindicare Assassins. His patience is endless, his timing exact. Pistolier: Brylidassian has been a Pathfinder for quite some time, and as such has collected various weapons. He has become very skilled in the use of all Eldar pistols, and is adept at dual-wielding them. Grenaider: In addition to collecting pistols, Brylidassian has also come across and used every Eldar grenade type. He is adept and highly skilled in the use of any and all grenades, especially Eldar grenades. Flaws: Cast out, Banished, Exiled, Eshair: Brylidassian is a Pathfinder. Thus, other craftworlders see him as being an exile--a grave insult among the eldar. He is mistrusted and misunderstood. Fragile: Brylidassian is very fragile. He is small, short, and weak. He is very agile and swift, but has relativley low endurance. Melee-Deficient: Brylidassian has decided to focus on his strengths. As such, he has almost no training in melee combat. He is on the level of a Tau Fire Warrior. Though he is somewhat able to avoid/evade, and is rarely seen at all from his hiding places. Secret Loyalty: Though an outcast, Brylidassian believes he has a duty to the Eldar race as a whole. He came to believe this after a meeting and discussion with a Harlequin Solitaire in the webway...or perhaps it was Cegorach himself. This often conflicts with his desire for freedom though.
Just before he followed the others down, Saruhai placed one melta bomb on the middle of the roof. Building "alterations" are fair game she said... Chuckling he hurried after the reaper. I'm not sure if eldar can be nulls, seeing as how they are innately psychic. GM's call though.
i was unsure about this, but wanted to make him as out-cast and distant as possible. DEFINATLEY using this guy for other stuff as well.
OOC: I was thinking the same thing as Alldoom to be honest. Although im not sure if he's saying the character literally has no soul. (Can you even do that in W40k ) Or if hes a pariah/blank, and that can't be done for Eldar I'm fairly sure.
OOC:I dont think you can have an Eldar pariah. Only Eldar blanks are Solitaires. http://wh40k.lexicanum.com/wiki/Blank#.Uz4-aFeGHPE